Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Despite the drawbacks offered by industrial

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and

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containing

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amount

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amounts

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of

sugar

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, those sugary

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unstoppably have been being consumed by

people

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. Increasing the price is considered

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effective way to avoid

people

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from consuming too much sugary food and drink.

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,

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statement has no proof to be the best solution to that case.

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, I do not agree with that

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following reasons.

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and foremost, making sugary

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more expensive

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not impactful since it is unable to stop the addiction and alter

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people

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’s perception towards expensive items. Sugary

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and

beverages

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processed in industries are often found addictive. By making them less affordable it doesn’t mean that the addicted consumers will stop buying them.

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, a lot of buyers assume that the higher the price of

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, the more prestigious they are.

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, the processed chocolate

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containing much

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that

are

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sold

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high price are considerably hunted by many

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since it is seen as

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luxury items.

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to that, some more applicable approaches can be

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effective ways

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sugary

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consumption.

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, implementing a particular regulation that imposes the manufacturers to produce less-

sugar

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foods

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and

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is much more impactful. By doing

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,

sugar

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content in

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and

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can be controlled. It can be done

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by replacing the chemical-processed sweeteners with the natural ones produced from fruits

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as

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that are proven to be healthier.

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, massive campaigns about the drawbacks obtained by consuming too much

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are required to raise peoples’ awareness. In a nutshell, making

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sugary

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less affordable is not the best solution to drive

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to less-

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consumption

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habits

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. Limiting sweetener content in industrial

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and

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along with enormous campaigns about some bad impacts of eating too

much

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sugary

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are more approachable.