Some governments provide financial assistance for retired, unemployed and disabled citizens. In other countries, families provide support for these people. Discuss both systems and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, there is much controversy over the most responsible organ for supporting the residents who are not able to afford their finances. In some countries

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this

is the

government

's responsibility, while in other places their families have the duty.

Although

it is noteworthy to bear in mind that both sides need to do their best to help

this

vulnerable society, in my

opinion

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the

government

should play a greater role. The following essay will overlook both views and

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with my opinion. On one hand, the

government

has always been viewed as the most capable authority in a country to solve

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problems. It not only has the capacity to do it but

also

is expected by the voters.

In addition

, the number of these citizens is increasing while the inflation is.

For example

, in recent years the number of unemployed

members

of a family doubled, so the other family

members

are not able to afford the expenses

any more

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.

Moreover

, the

disable

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people require the advanced facilities to live a life that they deserve which paying is only feasible for the

government

.

Finally

, humans have been paying taxes during their lives with

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hope of having a reasonable retirement with their pensions.

On the other hand

, in some

countries

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the family is expected to manage the finances of their unable

members

as the sheer responsible one due to the duties they have toward

eachothers

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each other

.

For instance

, the elderly

members

move to their offspring's houses and live with them for their remnant years of lives as

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dependent

person

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. It is said that as they took care of their children in their childhood, the young generation should reciprocate their

favor

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by taking care of them over their old ages. The

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citizens are being taken care

by

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relatives because they understand their needs better.

Lastly

, unemployed persons should ask for help from their siblings since they are connected with blood. To sum up, I believe that based on

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reasons the

government

might be a better organ to help vulnerable society

members

. Though the

government

due to the citizens' services and the family due to their bounds have

this

responsibility, the

government

has a greater power to deal with these obstacles.