Some think Government spending on Infrastructure (Transport, Housing etc) is considered the most important for a nation. While others believe that Education, Health and HR values to be more important areas for government expenditure. Discuss both views and give your opinion
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In
this
modern scenario,all things are considered to be the most imperative for countries it may be technical or non-technical,but here some individuals believet
that they should be necessary for citizens to survive luxurious life in terms of accommodation and convey amenities,so Correct your spelling
believe
believes
government
must take responsibility to improve these facilities
,while others argue that pedagogy,well-being and HR values are the most dominant,thus
authorities should spend money on these provisions.
To embark on,there are some reasons behind it why government
has to point out on the Add an article
the government
facilities
of housing and transporting.Firstly
,these days,many destitute multitudes have become homeless due to overpopulation as well as increasing home rents.Consequently
,many masses are used to survive under the trees and beside the roads.Secondly
,although
transport amenities are improved in metropolitan areas,some rural areas are troubled with the lack of bus services.As a result
,many scholars are not able to reach their destinations.For instance
,most of the youngsters can not go to colleges or schools,even though they have a desire to study.This
is also
one of the reason
why Change to a plural noun
reasons
regime
should have to centre on these provisions.
On another hand,nowadays,Correct article usage
the regime
although
there are many medical facilities
,still many people
are dying as they are not unable to receive a
treatment on time Remove the article
apply
due to
they do not have enough money to get treatment,Correct word choice
because
therefore
the regime should spend money on constructing new hospitals.For example
,these days,in private hospitals,poor people
may not be get
Wrong verb form
getting
a
therapy because they are used to Remove the article
apply
demand
high income,Wrong verb form
demanding
thus
government
try to provide free service those
Change preposition
to those
people
who are below poverty.Moreover
,not only health
department is primary but Correct article usage
the health
also
education
and HR departments are Correct article usage
the education
also
imperative for destitute people
,so authorities try to enables
all of these Change the verb
enable
facilities
free of cost for them in order to they will survive happily.
To conclude,both statements play an indispensable role in everyone's life,so government
should be considered all of these facilities
are important on
their own way,Change preposition
in
therefore
education,transport,housing,health and HR values are imperative.Submitted by anushachenna15 on
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