Some think Government spending on Infrastructure (Transport, Housing etc) is considered the most important for a nation. While others believe that Education, Health and HR values to be more important areas for government expenditure. Discuss both views and give your opinion
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this
modern scenario,all things are considered to be the most imperative for countries it may be technical or non-technical,but here some individuals Linking Words
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that they should be necessary for citizens to survive luxurious life in terms of accommodation and convey amenities,so Correct your spelling
believe
believes
government
must take responsibility to improve these Use synonyms
facilities
,while others argue that pedagogy,well-being and HR values are the most dominant,Use synonyms
thus
authorities should spend money on these provisions.
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Use synonyms
government
has to point out on the Add an article
the government
facilities
of housing and transporting.Use synonyms
Firstly
,these days,many destitute multitudes have become homeless due to overpopulation as well as increasing home rents.Linking Words
Consequently
,many masses are used to survive under the trees and beside the roads.Linking Words
Secondly
,Linking Words
although
transport amenities are improved in metropolitan areas,some rural areas are troubled with the lack of bus services.Linking Words
As a result
,many scholars are not able to reach their destinations.Linking Words
For instance
,most of the youngsters can not go to colleges or schools,even though they have a desire to study.Linking Words
This
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also
one of the Linking Words
reason
why Change to a plural noun
reasons
regime
should have to centre on these provisions.
On another hand,nowadays,Correct article usage
the regime
although
there are many medical Linking Words
facilities
,still many Use synonyms
people
are dying as they are not unable to receive Use synonyms
a
treatment on time Remove the article
apply
due to
they do not have enough money to get treatment,Correct word choice
because
therefore
the regime should spend money on constructing new hospitals.Linking Words
For example
,these days,in private hospitals,poor Linking Words
people
may not be Use synonyms
get
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getting
a
therapy because they are used to Remove the article
apply
demand
high income,Wrong verb form
demanding
thus
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government
try to provide free service Use synonyms
those
Change preposition
to those
people
who are below poverty.Use synonyms
Moreover
,not only Linking Words
health
department is primary but Correct article usage
the health
also
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education
and HR departments are Correct article usage
the education
also
imperative for destitute Linking Words
people
,so authorities try to Use synonyms
enables
all of these Change the verb
enable
facilities
free of cost for them in order to they will survive happily.
To conclude,both statements play an indispensable role in everyone's life,so Use synonyms
government
should be considered all of these Use synonyms
facilities
are important Use synonyms
on
their own way,Change preposition
in
therefore
education,transport,housing,health and HR values are imperative.Linking Words
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