Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a growing opine among the general population , that youngsters will study well when they are rewarded rather than punished . Since the majority of

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are stimulated with encouragement and they tend to be depressed with punishing ,

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writer is in complete agreement with the given notion In the following essay ,

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writer wishes to

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with , most

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and

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, try to get the best out of their

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by using various methods.

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some may stimulate them by giving even a small thing when they are doing good things ,most

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and

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just ignore them .

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, by doing

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small thing, they stimulate to think and perform well in the future .

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, research published by Oxford University has found that

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tend to perform well in exams when they are rewarded for previous achievements than those who are not rewarded. At the same time , Punishments may affect more negatively on

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since it may lead to embarrassment and depression. Unfortunately , most

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and

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tend to punish their

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in front of a large crowd even for small mistakes and most colleagues of that

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then

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may try to bully the student .

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, youngsters could develop anger towards society and some may even develop depression .

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, according to a paper article in "The Hindu'' , there are about 180 suicide cases of youngsters below 15Y in Tamilnadu during

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year and ,the main cause has been found as depression . In conclusion , even though

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and

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tend to punish their children with good purpose , most of the children will suffer due to its effects while

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who get rewards tend to do good for the rest of their life.

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writer opines that

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and

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should change from punishments to rewards if they really want to correct their children.