You have just returned home from a holiday and have received photographs from a friend who was on holiday with you. Write to your frind thanking them for the photographs. You should include: -a description of the photos -the most memorable thing about the holiday -invite them to come and stay with you

Dear John, Hope you and your family doing amazing. I am writing
this
letter in the context of the photograph that I had just received for our holiday in Manali. The picture look amazing and rejuvenated my memories of the trip.
Moreover
, my parents
also
loved it as it reflects the friendship bond between the two of us. Trekking to the top of the cliff has made my trip unforgettable and I really liked the bonfire dinner there and it was one of the most memorable acts because the view from there was mesmerising as one can see the whole city.
Besides
, the stay at the local homestay was so relaxing and beyond any expression of words.
Furthermore
, I would like to invite you to my new farmhouse in the outskirts of Shimla and be my guest. We would enjoy and rover around the city and its surroundings. I once again thank you for the beautiful picture and hope to listen from you soon. Yours lovingly, Ram
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