Recently You saw an article in a news paper journal about a City/town -you know and some of the information in article was incorrect. Write a letter to editors regarding this In your letter you should tell • How you know about this city/town • What information was incorrect • What the editor should do about this

Dear Sir/Madam, I am Sejal Patel and l am a research scientist in IPCA Laboratory I recently read an article about the history of Hyderabad city. The main endeavour of writing

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letter is to express my dissatisfaction regarding a few points in the article which seem incorrect as per my perspective. I was born and brought up in

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city so

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mostly aware

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this

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colourful city.

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, there were some mistakes in your 'The Time’ article. So, please let me take a moment to elaborate on them.

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, it was written that

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of unity will be started in the

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month which is not true. In fact, it would take six months to accomplish the construction work.

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, there was mentioned that lockdown will be

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imposed

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from the

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week onwards but as per the Covid

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it is not possible to implement

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. I hope you can understand my above-mentioned situation. It would be helpful to

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apply

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society if you could do some appropriate corrections and publish

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so people know about the truth. I hope you find my suggestions helpful. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon Yours faithfully, Sejal Patel

sejupatel17Mon Mar 07 2022

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The Greeting

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Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

199 words

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The Greeting

The increasing availability of low-cost airlines now lets people travel around the world. Some feel this is a positive development while others think it is negative overall. Discuss both sides

In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

In certain nations, parents have high academic expectations for their children, resulting in limited leisure time. What could be the potential benefits and drawbacks of this for the children and the society they are part of

Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability, while others think that hard work and practice can make you successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many students find it harder to study when they are at university or college than when they were at school. Why is this? What can be done to solve the problem?