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Recently You saw an article in a news paper journal about a City/town -you know and some of the information in article was incorrect. Write a letter to editors regarding this In your letter you should tell • How you know about this city/town • What information was incorrect • What the editor should do about this

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am Sejal Patel and l am a research scientist in IPCA Laboratory I recently read an article about the history of Hyderabad city. The main endeavour of writing
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 letter is to express my dissatisfaction regarding a few points in the article which seem incorrect as per my perspective. I was born and brought up in
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 city so
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mostly aware
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this
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 colourful city.
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, there were some mistakes in your 'The Time’ article. So, please let me take a moment to elaborate on them.
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, it was written that
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 of unity will be started in the
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 month which is not true. In fact, it would take six months to accomplish the construction work.
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, there was mentioned that lockdown will be
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imposed
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 from the
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 week onwards but as per the Covid
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 it is not possible to implement
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. I hope you can understand my above-mentioned situation. It would be helpful to
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society if you could do some appropriate corrections and publish
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 so people know about the truth. I hope you find my suggestions helpful. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon Yours faithfully, Sejal Patel

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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