It is often said that nowadays about a role the administration of the country or the city and their economy, money and financial possibility for local
education
and other cultural subjects. From my
point
of view, I partly agree with
this
idea and I explain the reasons for
this
in the below essay.
Firstly
, there is no denying that the
arts
are
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pointFix the agreement mistake
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in
culturalCorrect article usage
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liveReplace the word
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of each
citizensChange to a singular noun
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.
For example
, in childhood most of us liked a painted and danced,
thus
the
arts
were in our habits and souls. We all know
a Correct article usage
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talented people, they are very expressive, wise and bright due to the
arts
.
Therefore
,
todays'Correct your spelling
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society can not ignore significant creature actions by different people.
In contrast
to the above
point
,
an Remove the article
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education
is
mostCorrect article usage
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important product for the international world.
For instance
. Almost
eachChange the determiner
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student
inChange preposition
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the Remove the article
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our planet after finishing
his Correct pronoun usage
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high school want and planning
goingWrong verb form
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to faculties of universities or colleges. The
education
needs
a Remove the article
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full support
byChange preposition
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his government and local administrations
,Remove the comma
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because his importance for future and current students is very unbelievable.
In addition
, without allocating
education
will not
be involveChange the verb form
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in social structure and will not be a perspective and successful institute for the community.
In conclusion, I partly agree with
this
point
. In my opinion, the
arts
are a very necessary thing for society, there is a get
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normal financial support by government, but
education
more important than
arts
for social communities and it should allocate more money.