You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
Some individuals commented that rather than mitigating global warming, human beings should survive with it. Personally, I strongly disagree with the view since scientific evidence has shown that if not tackled, all the
livings
on the planet would be extinct soon and the unique way out to deal with it is changing dramatically the natural Fix the agreement mistake
living
energy
sources. This
essay will shed light on the overriding reasons for my disagreement and provide evidence to prove the arguments. There are manifold motives why I believe individuals should find a way to eschew climate alteration.
First and foremost, if not irradicated, the human specimen is menaced to disappear. In other words
, there is no mid-term when addressing facts about global warming due to
the fact that if any measure is not taken urgently, the planet earth
could be extinct. Capitalize word
Earth
For example
, the new projection by IPCC pointed out that from now to 10 or 20 years, extreme weather events like cyclones, floods, and the increasing average temperature will continue soaring. As a result
, the harsh weather victims will climb as the earth becomes an inappropriate place to live.
Secondly
, energy
matrix changing is the unique pathway to glossing over climate issues. The carbon footprints sent to the earth's atmosphere is
increasing daily Correct subject-verb agreement
are
due to
the fast lighting construction of industries, increasing
Correct word choice
and increasing
in
Change preposition
apply
automobiles
factories, Change the noun form
automobile
for
this
reason, the world folk should invest more in renewable energy
sources. For instance
, the
new investigation by Correct article usage
a
energy
connoisseurs showcased that one solar power plant of 10 MV powers 1000 houses and a significant number of industries and reduces 10 times the emission of exhaust fumes. Hence
, implanting at least 5 of these energy
power plants across the world avoids
the world from collapsing.
In conclusion, in fact, evidence demonstrates that it is almost impossible to live with climate change on our planet because it will vanish our species in the near future. Verb problem
prevents
Therefore
, I still strongly disagree with the statement. In addition
, I recommend the world-ruling power instils measures to counter the environmental clime change.Submitted by vascomunguarepenete on
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task response
Ensure each paragraph directly addresses the essay prompt and maintains focus on the argument against living with climate change.
coherence cohesion
Work on improving the introduction and conclusion. Include a clear thesis statement in the introduction and summarize key points in the conclusion.
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