Many governments have laws that ban the sale and use of hard drugs like heroin and cocaine, yet they allow people to freely buy other more socially acceptable drugs like tobacco and alcohol. Laws that prohibit the sale and consumption of ‘hard’ drugs should be applied to other more widely tolerated drugs such as tobacco and alcohol. What is your opinion?

For years hard

drugs

like heroin

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been viewed as illegal

substances

to be traded while tobacco and alcohol trading has been acceptable, but recently it is being said that the same law should be executed to ban these safer

drugs

either. It is noteworthy to bear in mind that these legal

substances

also

can be

dangerouse

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dangerous

.

However

, I believe that they should not be illegal as long as the government has control over them. The following essay overlooks two rationales that support my opinion.

First

,

although

the harm that these two

substances

can cause should not be underestimated, they are clear and treatable.

However

, the consequences of using hard

drugs

including physical dependence are more

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to deal with.

For example

, the effect that heroin can cause

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brain

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is irreversible while the cigarette's negative effects can be prevented by education.

In addition

, the means of using hard

drugs

are more prone to transmit infections, whereas tobacco and alcohol do not suffer from

this

disadvantage.

Second

, imposing rules against these soft

substances

might move their trading to the

undergrand

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underground

undergrad

.

Consequently

, the quality of them

decrease

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and even some fatal components might be added to them.

For instance

, a great number of people are dying by consuming

metanol

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methanol

instead

of ethanol in the countries where

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alcohol is forbidden. Their

counsumption

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consumption

will prevail;

hence

,

the

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public

saftey

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safety

will not preserve unless the government have

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close control

on

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their mediums

instead

of

illegalize

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them. To sum up, I believe imposing the same rules on soft

drugs

as hard ones to ban their consumption will not contribute to

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public

saftey

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safety

.

On the contrary

, it will increase the chance of harm.

Moreover

, as these products are less harmful, they can be used with

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close monitoring.