You have just returned home from a holiday and have received photographs from a friend who was on holiday with you. Write to your frind thanking them for the photographs. You should include: -a description of the photos -the most memorable thing about the holiday -invite them to come and stay with you

Dear Sushant, I hope you reached home safely. Thank you so much for sending over the fabulous pictures
especially
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the one which we took
near
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dead
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valley. The sightseeing was breathtaking and
photos
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the photos
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came out fabulous. One of the
unforgetable
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unforgettable
thing
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about the vacation is the camping trip we did near
Yosemitepark
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Yosemite park
. That night we had a lot of fun and enjoyment.
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the barbeque party was
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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