A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Alice, Hope you and your family doing amazing.
This
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letter is written to you to inform you that
this
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holiday I decided to take part in a camp and it will be my very
first
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time leaving home alone. The camp will be at Dewan Sri Pinang for 3 days 2 nights
besides
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that is a music camp .I was very excited as you know I'm an introverted person but I think I can learn a lot of music skills and make some new friendships that have the same hobby as mine.
although
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they must be a few disadvantages ,
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of all, I heard the place sleeping was very small and ditty
secondly
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, that we need to share nine-bathroom with hundreds of campers but I think I can solve
this
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problem .at
last
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, I will hope you could join me so please feel free to contact me. Can't wait to meet you and do camping with you.All the best, Regards, Lim
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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