A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear Alice,
Hope you and your family doing amazing.
This
letter is written to you to inform you that this
holiday I decided to take part in a camp and it will be my very first
time leaving home alone.
The camp will be at Dewan Sri Pinang for 3 days 2 nights besides
that is a music camp .I was very excited as you know I'm an introverted person but I think I can learn a lot of music skills and make some new friendships that have the same hobby as mine.
although
they must be a few disadvantages ,First
of all, I heard the place sleeping was very small and ditty secondly
, that we need to share nine-bathroom with hundreds of campers but I think I can solve this
problem .at last
, I will hope you could join me so please feel free to contact me.
Can't wait to meet you and do camping with you.All the best,
Regards,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite