Nowadays many people choose to be self-emplpyed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Recently, more and more
people
tren to run their own business
and not to work
in a company
. Generally
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this
become popular perhaps because they like to enjoy freedom
or doing their own decision. But there Add an article
the freedom
are
some Change the verb form
is
disadvantage
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disadvantages
for
working by them-self, Change preposition
to
such
as financial management and risk control.
To begin
with, there are serval reasons for why individuals choose to work
by them-self. Firstly
, they are not feel
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do not feel
satisfy
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satisfied
in
their Change preposition
with
company
. Such
as plenty of graduate
hold their ambitions and idea to Change to a plural noun
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work
in organization
, but Add an article
an organization
the organization
their
suggest not got accepted by Replace the word
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company
, some Add an article
the company
not
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do not
task
, so they leave Fix the agreement mistake
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company
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the company
a company
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work
by themself. Secondly
, youngagers
want freedom. Countless younger Correct your spelling
youngsters
youngers
people
have their own idea and they like to be their own boss, being a private teacher or running a small diner. Therefore
, youngagers
want to do something they like so they will choose to have their own Correct your spelling
youngsters
youngers
business
.
However
, individuals establish
their own Correct pronoun usage
who establish
business
have to Add an article
the fact
fact
some issues. Correct your spelling
face
Firstly
, they need to worry about finance. As Add an article
a beginning
beginning
the career needs to put huge money and needs to manage Add a comma
,beginning
cost
for every Add an article
the cost
things
. Change to a singular noun
thing
Secondly
. huge stress are
sustained by Change the verb form
is
people
. That is
stress come from new career success or not, and also
taking long
time for Change the article
a long
work
. For example
, every things
need to do by yourself. Change to a singular noun
thing
Thus
, Creating own business
have
to sustain various stress.
To sum up, Change the verb form
has
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a career is positive Correct your spelling
having
things
but Fix the agreement mistake
thing
people
must thinking
about Wrong verb form
think
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the consequence
consequence
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consequences
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...
