Your local council has decided to close the only park in your town and build a car park in its place. You believe this will have a bad effect on the people who live and work in the town. Write a letter to the mayor. In your letter introduce yourself explain why you think the decision is wrong say what you think the council should do instead

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Dear Mayor, I write
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letter to complain about your decision of closing our
town
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's park and building a car park in its
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. I have been living in
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town
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for 35 years and I have seen how the
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where originally lived is being destroyed brick by brick.
Firstly
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, our
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needs
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park as much as we need air to breathe or a
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to have a walk or for our children to play. It has been the centre of our everyday lives and its closing will do no good to the minds and bodies of our
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fellows.
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, you will be remembered as the mayor that obliterated the
last
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green corner we had.
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, I am sure that history will judge
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decision as a really bad idea.
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, I have done a survey amongst the people of the
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and they are completely unfavourable. Even the owners of shops and small businesses think that eliminating our gardens would have a negative impact on their customers, as they will have no reasons to go to local shops. If I were you, I would think who are the ones that have profited from your decision. On top of that, your project is a really bad idea. A botanical garden is what we need because it would attract tourism and would put our name on the map. Please, take my suggestion seriously and take that old-fashioned project back to the drawer. Yours sincerely
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