Many young people choose to take a year out between finishing school and starting university in order to gain work experience or to travel. The experience of non-academic life this offers benefits the individual when they return to education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that nowadays there are some youths who decide to take a gap year between their school and university studies to travel around or work somewhere. In my opinion, there is no hesitation that living those types of experiences has a positive impact and will benefit them
while
coming back to education life.
On one hand, gaining some work experience before going to university can make a difference as will undoubtedly broaden your mind Linking Words
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For example
, the fact of going to work on a farm will push the individual into the countryside lifestyle where values Linking Words
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On the other hand
, in my view, travelling abroad certainly Linking Words
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For instance
, visiting another country and meeting someone who brings us closer to local food and nutrition, could potentially unblock our aim to discover more tastes and nutritional properties. Linking Words
Overall
, all these experiences may be really practical to acknowledge your current interests.
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To conclude
, I think coming to a decision on how the future should be managed by the age of eighteen might be quite tough. Linking Words
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finishing school many people feel very lost as they do not know what studies fit them better and Linking Words
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end up choosing something in which they are not really interested . Being aware of the existence of these other possibilities can be helpful for clarifying ideas.Linking Words
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