Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is often said that human beings should find a suitable way to cope with

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change rather than prevent it. From my point of view ,I strongly disagree with

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idea.

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,one of the main reasons for

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argument is ,

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transformation and its

side_effects

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side effects

can be dangerous.

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,we all know

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this

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global problem most of the population who live in the world ,are suffering from weather conditions in their countries.

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, boiling hot weather could create a dire situation

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as becoming heatstroke.

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is a persuasive reason to avoid finding methods to live with

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change.

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this

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makes it clear why accustoming to

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horrible circumstance is not an appropriate decision.

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,another conspicuous reason is the impact on the world where humans are settling.

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this

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is true that

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change can

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because of

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man-made

disasters. One of these activities by individuals is ,creating high pollution levels. There is no denying that

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could cause a transformation in the weather

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a reduction in the number of days that are below freezing.

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,to generate a high pollution level ,clouds are removed from the sky. Needless to say ,human beings

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be able to cope with

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situation. Obviously ,methods that can help people to live with

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transformation can not be seen all around the globe. All things considered ,it becomes apparent there are multiple reasons behind each disagreement via societies. To summarise ,I completely disagree with the idea that the population can live with

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problem. I believe that

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trouble

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problem

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should be solved as soon as possible. It is predicted that to increase the temperature in the world ,the universe won't be a suitable place to live in ,in the near future.

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task response

While the essay addresses the topic prompt, it lacks depth and fails to provide a strong argument against living with climate change. The points made are somewhat superficial and could be further developed.

coherence cohesion

The essay has a basic structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. However, the ideas are not well-connected, leading to a lack of coherence and cohesion in the overall presentation.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

302 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

climate resilience
mitigation measures
greenhouse gas emissions
renewable energy
carbon footprint
sustainable practices
infrastructure adaptation
displaced communities
economic incentives
public health
international agreements
environmental regulations
biodiversity
future generations
green technology

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Human diet has changed throughout history. How has it changed? In your opinion, has the change been good or bad?