You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job

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Dear Mr and Mrs Saganti, I am writing to you in response to your “Telugu

Language

Teacher” advertisement in the “Indeed” job portal for a period of one year for your two children. I trust I'll be a suitable candidate for

this

position as I am currently receiving formal education in Telugu literature. I was born and brought up in Andhra with Telugu as my native

language

hence

I am fluent in speaking the

language

as well as reading and writing in it.

Besides

that, I have had several babysitting jobs on a part-time basis for many years and feel very equipped to take care of children. I am known to be a passionately traditional cook and I would love to add value to my time with your family by cooking delicious, authentic, and native food.

Moreover

, I could

also

tell stories from mythology, and folklore which will help your family build connections with our common cultural heritage.

In addition

to my expertise in the

language

, culture and teaching; my formal education requires me to gain practical experience as part of my course work. Your requirements,

therefore

, suit my current and future professional goals perfectly. I hope that my candidacy will be considered seriously. Yours sincerely, Sonia Kolluri

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Topic Vocabulary:

TESOL certification
Experience in teaching children
Knowledge of Australian culture
Passion for language education
Flexible and adaptable
Design customized lesson plans
Patient and understanding
Strong communication skills
Interpersonal skills
Participate in family activities
Enthusiasm for cultural exchange

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