Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole?

Illiteracy is one of the well-known urgent issues faced nationwide in developing countries. There seem to be two main causes and
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three effects, which we will discuss here. The possible main reason is augmenting
poverty
and instability of economics, which leads to
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of families
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school. Education is not affordable for a number of families because of the
poverty
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is
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illiterate
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in little villages and provinces in overpopulated countries.
According to
the UNICEF survey, the normal ratio of recipient and provider of education is 20*1,
however
in reality
this
ratio is 130*1 and more in 156 countries of the world. The effect of
this
problem on people and
society
can be quite serious.
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to earn money for
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. These
children
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education. In order to feed their families, many parents have no choice but
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their
children
to earn money
such
as illegal child labour, human trafficking and prostitution.
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innocent
children
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. A
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widely- observed impact is increasing crime, juvenile offenders and making
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dangerous place to live. In
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, it has immeasured bad effect on
society
as a whole.
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to educate. In summary,
poverty
and lack of educational facilities seem to be the main causes and they affect both individuals and
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society
as a whole. Educational sufficiency is almost
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method to overcome
poverty
, so governments are sure to introduce new educational systems in the near future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Literacy
  • Illiteracy
  • Poverty
  • Access
  • Educational resources
  • Social inequality
  • Discrimination
  • Gender disparity
  • Racial bias
  • Cultural norms
  • Technological advances
  • Political instability
  • Disruption
  • Education systems
  • Socioeconomic status
  • Job prospects
  • Health implications
  • Self-esteem
  • Empowerment
  • Economic growth
  • Social cohesion
  • Civic participation
  • Democratic processes
  • Exclusion
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