Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole?
Illiteracy is one of the well-known urgent issues faced nationwide in developing countries. There seem to be two main causes and
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in little villages and provinces in overpopulated countries. Correct your spelling
illiterate
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children
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society
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