In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Nowadays in some countries all around the world ,owning an accommodation is more significant than renting a home for citizens. There are multiple reasons why

this

is the

case

. From my point of view ,

this

can not be a positive situation.

Firstly

,to explain the reasons for

this

case

,one of the main reasons is investments.

For example

,in most countries all around the world where construction is the most common activity ,humans habitually are interested in investing their budget in purchasing accommodation to make a good profit.

Moreover

,we all know the value of homes is staggering

that

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can not be ignored.

This

is a cause why

this

is the

case

.

Additionally

, to buy

own

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their own

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home the statue of people can be identified.

Therefore

,

this

makes it clear

causes

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why it is a common and crucial operation are conspicuous that should be considered.

Secondly

,

this

can be a negative decision with numerous disadvantages.

For instance

,humans may decide to purchase their own accommodation

such

as an apartment or a detached house.

This

is true that in today's modern

world

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the price of these places is increasing dramatically and the population can not afford it. They are required to take out a mortgage from the bank. Obviously ,easier said than done because banks these days have many rules that most humans

could not

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be able to accept.

As a result

of borrowing money from the bank, they are not capable

to put

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of putting

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down a deposit and getting into debt will

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occur

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. All things considered ,it becomes apparent there are many detrimental effects that owning a home can

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bring

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by itself. To summarise ,

this

is true that many causes are noticeable

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this

case

. Needless to say ,

this

is not a positive situation. It is predicted that to continue

this

decision by societies ,the population who lose their money will increase considerably in the near future.