Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

School

is the most crucial platform for individuals to

study

, especially for children. Either government

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school

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schools

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are trying to revise their policies related to the impact of reward and punishment that happened in

school

.

However

, a handful of people believe that

student

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students

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could give a better

performance

when

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they

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the

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they

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are rewarded

by

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with

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something

such

as ranks, scores and gifts from

teachers

. The

further

explanations will

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below.

Main

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role of

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the student

a student

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student

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students

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is to

study

and to adapt

what

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to what

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is happening in their circumstances.

Nevertheless

, it could be difficult for the

students

to understand their responsibility. Many

students

have a possibility to perform their works

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underrated

updated

if they lost their interest to

study

.

Therefore

, there should be a trigger for

students

to become good

students

who have a great

performance

in their class or their

school

.

Teacher

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as someone who

accompany

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students

in

school

should be a person in charge to help

students

to improve their

performance

.

Performance

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itself consists of knowledge and behaviour. Based

of

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on

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my experience, my teacher often gave me an

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additional

score if I could

answered

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answer

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all of the

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questions

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when we were on

quiz

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the quiz

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.

Hence

, it

boost

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my

motivations

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motivation

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to keep learning about some particular subjects.

On the other hand

, some

teachers

of my friends like to

gave

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a

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punishment for their

students

if they could not

completed

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complete

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the task

namely

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name

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,

homeworks

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homework

or projects. In my opinion,

students

can get a reward and

a

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punishment

depends

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depending

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on their

behavior

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behaviour

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to

study

dilligently

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diligently

or not. According to

students'

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the students'

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survey, most

of

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students

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the students

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feel comfortable

to

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study

if they get some

motivations

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motivation

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from the people surrounding them. Because

motivations

can increase their performances and curiosities in many

field

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of knowledge that they got in the

school

. In

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,

also

what I completely agree is the best motivation amongst others is came from

teachers

and parents. So that's why I think both

of

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teachers

and parents can

coorperate

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cooperate

themselves as a supporting system for the

students

. Emotionally, it would be better for

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the student

a student

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student

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students

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to get some

motivations

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motivation

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than punishments. To conclude, I

am strongly agree

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if

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that

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students

could perform better in

school

or in any

places

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place

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when they get a compliment for their

performance

. Yet, it contingents on their

attitute

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attitude

towards their

study

. If

school's

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stakeholders can treat their

students

effectively. It will improve

performance

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the performance

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of the

students

.