You recently Stayed at your friends Place to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. write a letter to feed friend In your letter you should : • Describe what the accident was • explain when it happened • Suggest how the damage can be fixed

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Dear Kalyan, I hope you are doing well. The main endeavour of writing

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letter is to express my

regretness

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regrets

about a small accident

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occurred

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in your house. It was really a good time that you gave me

opportunity

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to stay at your home and to know more about the city as I am not aware

about

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area.

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Sunday, the TV remote broke down. When I was watching a cricket match. Actually, it was

extremely

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tense match and I lost my Control by seeing that my favourite team was going to be won the match and Suddenly the remote

felt

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down.

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I tried to repair it but the keys were not working. The following day, I Visited e nearby electronic shop. The shop owner promised me that it could be repaired in a couple of days and the will deliver to your home address. To

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I got relief and Come back home,and it will be working properly and you can enjoy your movie series. Once again I really apologised for that. See you soon. Regards, Sejal

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

183 words

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