You recently Stayed at your friends Place to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. write a letter to feed friend In your letter You Should : • Describe what the accident was • explain when it happened • Suggest how the damage can be fixed

#friends #place #house #friend #accident #damage

Dear Kalyan, I hope you are doing well. The main endeavour of writing

this

letter is to express my regrets about a small accident that occurred in your house. It was really a good time that you gave me the opportunity to stay at your home and to know more about the city as I am not aware of

this

area.

However

last

Sunday, the TV remote broke down. When I was watching a cricket match. Actually, it was an extremely tense match and I lost my Control by seeing that my favourite team was going to be won the match and Suddenly the remote fell down.

Then

I tried to repair it but the keys were not working. The following day, I Visited e nearby electronic shop. The shop owner promised me that it could be repaired in a couple of days and the will deliver to your home address. To know

this

I got relief and Come back home,and it will be working properly and you can enjoy your movie series. Once again I really apologised for that. See you soon. Regards, Sejal

Submitted by sejupatel17 on Tue Mar 08 2022

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7 paragraphs

185 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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