Some people think that it is necessary to travel to other places to learn about cultures . Other say that books , films and the internet can be used as a source of information about different cultures. Do you agree or disagree ?

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People have different opinions about learning about

cultures

. Some of them believe that it could be achieved by travelling to many countries, others think that

books

,films and the internet are quite enough to learn from. I agree that nowadays anything we need to know or learn is available

throughout

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the internet,

books

and films so no need for long way trips.

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essay will discuss the two main reasons behind my opinion which are less

cost

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and time consumed to learn about

cultures

First

, in the 21st century learning about different

cultures

is very easy and approachable. Beyond

this

, investigating different aspects of the country as well.

Books

and visual aids involve lots of information about how people

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different countries live, eat and deal socially.

Moreover

, how did these

cultures

started

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and how are they developing.

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, whenever

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need to know about a country

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open the laptop to watch about them on youtube ,

also

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read lots of articles that introduce them and sometimes

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watch

dicovery

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discovery

movies with my family that makes me feel more about the way they live. Through these means,

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can

also

notice their language and traditional costume and food.

Secondly

, due to its

low cost

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network,

books

and movies are good sources of seeking knowledge about any culture. Whenever a student or a

reseacher

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researcher

needs to investigate

about

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a country ,web pages and

literatures

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literature

kinds of literature

pieces of literature

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are available

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reasonable prices. There

are

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number

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low cost

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methods of learning which can guide students to better research including going to the library,googling and

free

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information on

worldwide

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web. In

conlusion

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conclusion

, there are various resources to know about any culture in the world. Volumes,web and tv shows introduce massive information easily and inexpensively.

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why people of all ages rely on them to thrive

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knowledge and research.

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303 words

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Some people think that it is necessary to travel to other places to learn about cultures . Other say that books , films and the internet can be used as a source of information about different cultures. Do you agree or disagree ?

Fully explain your ideas

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

Some peoole think that cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in countryside. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

People who live in large cities face a range of problem in their daily life. What are the most significant of these problem? How can these problem be tackled?

It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?