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Some people think that it is necessary to travel to other places to learn about cultures . Other say that books , films and the internet can be used as a source of information about different cultures. Do you agree or disagree ?

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People have different opinions about learning about
cultures
. Some of them believe that it could be achieved by travelling to many countries, others think that
books
,films and the internet are quite enough to learn from. I agree that nowadays anything we need to know or learn is available
throughout
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 the internet,
books
 and films so no need for long way trips.
This
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 and time consumed to learn about
cultures
.
First
, in the 21st century learning about different
cultures
 is very easy and approachable. Beyond
this
, investigating different aspects of the country as well.
Books
 and visual aids involve lots of information about how people
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 different countries live, eat and deal socially.
Moreover
, how did these
cultures
started
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 and how are they developing.
For example
, whenever
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 need to know about a country
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 open the laptop to watch about them on youtube ,
also
i
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 read lots of articles that introduce them and sometimes
i
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 watch
dicovery
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discovery
 movies with my family that makes me feel more about the way they live. Through these means,
i
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 can
also
 notice their language and traditional costume and food.
Secondly
, due to its
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 network,
books
 and movies are good sources of seeking knowledge about any culture. Whenever a student or a
reseacher
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researcher
 needs to investigate
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a country ,web pages and
literatures
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literature
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pieces of literature
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 are available
with
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 reasonable prices. There
are
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number
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 of
low cost
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 methods of learning which can guide students to better research including going to the library,googling and
free
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 information on
worldwide
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 web. In
conlusion
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conclusion
, there are various resources to know about any culture in the world. Volumes,web and tv shows introduce massive information easily and inexpensively.
That is
 why people of all ages rely on them to thrive
their
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 knowledge and research.
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