Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the advantage and disadvantage of tourist who visits such places?

the first problem that needs to be considered is the purpose of travelling. It

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an incredible moment when people decided to choose a complex destination to have a vacation. Many other tourism boards offer a beautiful track,

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, for ,instance to be visited by all family members. The transportation, the energy, and the money for these activities should be ready for any kind of reason. in general, the real issue is

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and bad aspects of these travel phenomena. For some groups of teenagers and nature lovers, they make their holidays

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delightful by challenging the body and the soul.

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, they are joining a summer holiday

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a rural area in a certain country. It will have a lot of risky places and accidents.

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, they are satisfied and want several times to challenge their adrenaline.

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, our society is encouraged to bring their bravery to face the real

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around them. the main advantage is that society could have an uncommon memory.

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, the solution is just to give them the opportunity to access the risky area of travelling but they have to understand the procedure.

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populations who are excited and curious to have the best moment of their vacations,

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could deal with some cruel schedules of tourism.

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it is not going to be easy, the offerings of travel agents are available for a community already stated.

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, they may be prepared for some

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standards, special guidances and jackets that can be used to protect their body safely.

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of the moment to enjoy the travelling, our community should plan

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possible

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as the itinerary must be well organized and scheduled by the agency. in conclusion, the beneficial

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for a traveller who

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to go to challenging places, they will have the best experiences. meanwhile, the worst aspect that we have to

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is the risk of danger.

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, we must guarantee life-saving and have life insurance regarding our planning to visit the destination.