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Some people think that because some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?

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In some, countries tougher
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 like maths and philosophy are given as choices to the children. I completely agree with the statement. Because
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 everything might not be the strength to the student and optional courses selected on interest can help to learn the
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 willingly without any hardship.
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, a child cannot be an expert in all the curriculum but, he might have a specific skill in English he should have the right to choose what he wants to study. To explain
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, in the curriculum there are several
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 to go through if the educational institution gives the option to choose the
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 the people would opt for the
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 he is willing at and can secure more percentile than the
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 which is mandatory.
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 mandatory
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 will not help students to study the
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 in will
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 it will make complicated.
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, an optional
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 will be eligible to qualify them.
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, Ramanujan is a great mathematician who is not good in geography and chemistry but these math practices are used worldwide.
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, if the
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 are made mandatory children will not study anything on will.
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, an additional
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 which is not necessary will downgrade the student which he is good at.
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, in India ,schools have all the
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 are mandatory to complete during their course making kids more depressed and getting a reverse response by failing in all the
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. To sum up, it is always not necessary to add the
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 without a need. So
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 can give as a choice to the children in the end definitely everyone will be benefited.
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