some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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that, in most cases a majority of crowd concern, if teenagers are permitted to decide about

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basic needs of their

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; food, clothes and entertainment it will have an unprecedented impact on our community which creates more egoistic people.

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, it is believed by the public, letting a child makes decisions plays a vital role whilst growing.

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essay delves into both points of view. To commence with, in the status quo, rarely can we recognize a family that

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their child

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a part in everyday matters. They personally think that, if all children appeals will be afforded immediately, it might cause to build up a society full of selfish people which is not easy to deal with. It is undoubtedly undeniable that they

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interest whatsoever

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the other`s

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. They may

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their thoughts are the thing

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matters the most.

On the other hand

, some individuals admit that

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decision making is one the most crucial skills that children ought to bone up on

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. Teaching your children to make their own decisions has several benefits. A good illustration is that

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they become much more independent like a mature adult. When a 5-15 years old

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determination leads to

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it conveys

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a sense of

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and I cannot deny it. Taking everything into consideration, I concur with letting teenagers make up their minds about their daily routines

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the fact that the advantages take priority from not being permitted to do something alone/lonely.