In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing, or medicine. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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strongly with technology and high
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there are still arguments rising around the world about the prohibition of animal
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for
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, clothing and
medicines
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. I partially disagree about the prevention of
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for
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and
medicines
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, as there are many supportive reasons regarding them in
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hand,
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would like to say that
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disagree about the
necessity
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of using
animals
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in
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fashion
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industry
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. As we all are aware that
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usage
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fashion
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industry
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is mostly adopted and
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used since the old times, at that time period the production of clothes or
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accessories are very limited. Due to
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limitation and increase in demand
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unique clothes and accessories animal skins and other extractions were used thoroughly. But in
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world with the high development of technology and production, availability of
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number of options has been met, fulfilment of
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demand has been done in the
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industry
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, artificial skin textures and artificial leather products were being made by many top
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brands. With
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there is no
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usage
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of
animals
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, coming to
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food
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industry
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people need to recognize that the high
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of animal
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is required. As meat is high protein
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which is one
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the main
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human
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body, these proteins can't be met with
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veggies, if we consider
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of
animals
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for
food
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.
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food
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is considered
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high protein and
vitamin rich
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, which can be never replaced with artificial elements as they exist naturally in them.
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, consider the prohibition of
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animals
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then
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the requirement of
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proteins and vitamins should be met by veggies and
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highly impossible in some countries due to the less agricultural land, not only
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but
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the requirement of the vegetables will be booming and
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high requirements cant be met globally cause of the high rate of meat-eating population. Coming to
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as we already know that animal extractions for
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usage
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were mostly banned throughout all countries. But for testing the vaccines or
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on
animals
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cant be avoided as the human life risk is more valuable than that of
animals
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. Rather than
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it is better in all ways to test on
animals
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because one for many is a great option. In conclusion, animal
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food
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and medicine industries can neither be avoided nor be replaced. But coming to the
fashion
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industry
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i
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would like to acknowledge that there is no demanding
necessity
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of
animals
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usage
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