There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports center that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports center. In your letter: describe what the problem with the changing rooms is say what happened the last time you complained explain what you want the manager to do.

Dear Anand, I am writing
this
letter to express my disappointment with the current condition of changing rooms. It has been observed that
due to
lack of maintenance, the quality of services in
facility
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the facility
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is degrading
day-by-day
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. Most of the door locks in the
facility
are not working properly, they are either damaged or broken, which is a serious concern of privacy issues. I have been complaining to the
facility
supervisor, Mr Anant . He assured that quick action would be taken to address
this
problem.
However
, it has been a week and no action has been taken. Many users have
also
submitted a written complaint for unsatisfactory services. On behalf of every user, I would request you assign
this
task to an accountable person
and
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resolve these privacy concerns and bring back the high standards of our
facility
. We are looking for immediate action from you for
this
. Yours sincerely Sandeep
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Provide more specific details about how the problem affects users daily.
coherence cohesion
Enhance logical structure by clearly separating the introduction, body, and conclusion paragraphs.
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The letter clearly addresses the manager and outlines the problem with specific details.
coherence cohesion
The closing and greeting are appropriately used, maintaining a formal tone.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, which makes the letter easy to follow.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • inadequate
  • unsanitary
  • persistent
  • maintenance
  • rectify
  • detrimental
  • substandard
  • facilities
  • insufficient
  • conducive
  • prompt attention
  • feedback
  • complaint escalation
  • sanitation
  • renovation
  • urgent priority
  • responsive action
  • immediate resolution
  • implement changes
  • customer satisfaction
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