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many manufactured food and drink products contain high level off sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

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Nowadays the consumption of
sugar
 is very high and it leads to some
health
 issues,So many companies manufactured
food
 and drink products with a high amount of sugars .I agree with the statement because when product price has been increased the
people
 are unable to buy them so they consume less
sugar
. Majorly most
health
 issues are related to the high intake of
sugar
 into human bodies which cause diabetes,cholesterol and heart diseases.In many ,countries
people
 are suffered from diabetes because they take a high amount of
sugar
. So,some of the nations are increasing the price of
sugar
 content
foods
 like sweets,chocolates,candies ,so the
people
 can take
this
food
 to special events.
Moreover
 in schools in some nations are providing healthy
food
instead
 .In ,japan the schools provide good
food
 which doesn't contain
sugar
 and
also
 in the school canteens they hike the prices of
sugar
 having
foods
 so that children are unable to pay for them so they can take healthy
food
 . Particularly at schools, children should be thought to determine the robust
foods
 rather than consuming these sickly-sweet products.There is another idea to tell the
people
 about the damage by consuming
sugar
-containing
foods
 by sending flyers or tv or social media platforms which is helpful to make awareness in
people
. In conclusion,
people
 can take care of their
health
 because the high consumption of sugary
foods
 causes severe
health
 problems .Not only
people
 but
also
 government can take some action to prevent
sugar
 consuming
foods
.Some
,
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nations have already implemented these techniques.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sugar consumption
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • encourage
  • expensive
  • reduce
  • effectively
  • discourage
  • tight budget
  • purchasing
  • disproportionately
  • lower-income individuals
  • healthier food choices
  • demand
  • regardless
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