Wild animals have no place in the 21th century. So protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In the present day, when a country tends to prioritize improving
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of all humans, they appear to disregard the other aspects that
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, our wildlife. To underline why I fairly disagree
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the idea that we are unable to spare the dissimilar living beings a place to inherit their kinds, the discussion will be illustrated below. The importance of tax and monetary
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outweigh lives. Animal protection costs
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considerable fiscal savings.
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, investing the government budget on infrastructure, surveillance, and hospitality sounds more sensible and agreeable to the taxpayer.
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likely to enhance the focus on being protective of a governed society. With that, I have to point out my opinions on why I protest against
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inconsiderate direction of our states.
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tool for wildlife protection called awareness. By starting to educate oneself to understand how other living creatures have contributed towards building a balanced ecosystem and
thus
, a stable, healthy human society, establishes a foundation to avoid harming them.
Secondly
, anyone can help widen the wildlife homeland by voluntarily discouraging deforestation.
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to progress
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, they are the need of the hour, without so much money that goes to waste. To conclude, the
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pays attention to
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and safety of the
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; yet, I have to argue that humans may overlook the available potential tools which keep the world's wild animals alive. Humans must be there to sort out
this
problem by any means.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • biodiversity
  • intrinsic value
  • resilience
  • habitats
  • conservation
  • ecological services
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