In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby, To what extend do you think this is a possible trend?

Earlier days,many individuals used to prefer shopping quite often,but these days,purchasing things have become constantly increasing by leaps and bounds,

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it brings

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enormously

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negative influence among people in terms of wasting a large amount of

money

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as well as increasing a robbery rate,so

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is a pessimistic impact.

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essay will go into better detail with my subject view. To embark on,In

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modern scenario,a number of people

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misusing their

money

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by acquiring many things from stores even though they do not need

that products

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that product

those products

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youngsters

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concentration levels may be reduced on other works as already their mind filled with that hobby,so they will show interest on that particular task only.

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,according to the survey,leisure activities

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as playing games and physical activities have disappeared because

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many children

are replaced

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have replaced

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these activities with buying many things.

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masses

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the masses

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do not have enough

money

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to buy clothes as well as

jewelleries

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jewellery

pieces of jewellery

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,they are used to stealing cash from other pockets.

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,robbery cases will be increased day by day. On another hand,another noticeable issue is individuals may have debts because their offspring forced them to give capital,so families have to take

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from the banks for the sake of their

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children

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as they do not want to disappoint their youngsters.

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,it is undeniable fact that,especially In India,parents can do anything for their boys or girls,whether it is good or bad because their desire is children should have to be very happy at any cost. To conclude,there are many negative impacts of

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trend in terms of thefts,unnecessary expenditures as well as highly debts,

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everyone tries to overcome

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hobby by learning good habits because

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hobby may spoil your's life in the future.