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Some people think that getting a degree from University is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Some are of the view that finding a dream
job
 with a university degree is the easiest, yet others believe
that is
 much more convenient
by increasing
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 work experience. From my practical point of view,
although
 tertiary
education
 is important for enhancing professions, working in different occupations gives people to excel in many
skills
. On the one hand, it is a known fact that university
education
 become a part of mandatory
education
 in most countries, and some are those
which
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 receive their student's vacation-oriented resources in these institutes.
Also
, today well-known occupations like doctors and teachers, institutions have to search
their
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 potential stuff being to a diploma from
such
 kinds of specific fields. Being a part of university
education
 has enhanced our working life in a plethora of ways from interpersonal
skills
 to multi-tasking
skills
. Take a graduate as an example; he has the most advantages at several levels compared to others.
On the other hand
, gone are the days when completing a high
education
 supplied big career opportunities and
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 to doors what happens. In present times, everyone knows that
job
 experience is of utmost importance to guarantee to find a good
job
. There are two main reasons why
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that
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. One of the most notable aspects of their career path is developing working
skills
 like time management and strategic thinking which we are unable to get access to without making a practice.
Moreover
, every
job
 experience gives us a greater deal of satisfaction about what we expect
a
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dream
job
. That means it is the best way the understand our ambitions. In conclusion
of
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this
, despite
the
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tertiary
education
 giving a greater deal of life
skills
 without less difficulty
to find
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in finding
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 a
job
,
job
 experiences are much more satisfying for both employee and employer.
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task response
Make sure to fully address the prompt by discussing both sides of the argument and giving a clear opinion at the end.
coherence and cohesion
Work on organizing your ideas in a more coherent manner and ensure that your introduction and conclusion effectively present the topic and opinion.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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