Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “When people succeed, it is entirely because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with their success.” Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

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that the fruit of hard

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is sweet and tasty.

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fact, I disagree

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that

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solely depends on luck and hard

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no role in

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way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs. First and foremost,

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is built over consistent effort over a long period of time. A few years

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, in our childhood, it

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taught that ‘

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is not an overnight dream’.

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is embedded in the thoughts and activities, and even during

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of failure,

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motto fuels a person towards

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.

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, constant effort and perseverance turn failure into stepping stones towards

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can be better demonstrated by the example of Thomas Alva Edison, who made dozens of stunning inventions. In the journey to the invention of the electric bulb, he failed many times. But he was not willing to give up. Eventually,

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of numerous sleepless

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he won.

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boosted his confidence to continue his explorations in the field of science and physics.

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, only determination and hard

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can bring out

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.

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,

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is a

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of combining research, education and planning.

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, with the discovery of

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project management principles and

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improvement tools, a person aspiring to become successful in any domain can easily achieve the expected results. In

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process, the word luck should be replaced with proper planning.

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can be better demonstrated with my personal experience. When was working as the head of quality improvement in a hospital, the accreditation process seemed to be an unachievable target.

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with proper guidance from

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experienced people and by using the process improvement toolkit, I managed to fulfil the requirements.

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, the organization was accredited. So, it is certainly clear that preplanned studies can pave the way to

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. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that

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is not a

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of luck.

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is because

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is created through hard

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and planned execution.