Modern appliances in the home have become more common, leaving no doubt that advances in technology have improved our lifestyle. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

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In the present world, our

home

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appliances

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had been developed and advanced to enhance our lifestyle to become simpler. From my point of view, it is agreed that these

appliances

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have

improve

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our life to become easier. In the following paragraphs, the reasons to support my opinion will

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more in detail.

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, these

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technology

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help to reduce

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people

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time

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to clean up their house as we can not

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denied

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that most of the

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people

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life was given

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work.

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, Office

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that

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rushing to work in

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morning and head back

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when it is already

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apply

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night

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nighttime

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time

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. These

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such

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dishwasher

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a dishwasher

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or an automatic vacuum cleaner will give more

time

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to their very limited relaxing

time

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this

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makes it clear that automated

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help to improve

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lifestyle

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lifestyles

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, these modern

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help in improving

people

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's comfort and convenience.

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, we are able to control our lighting through our mobile

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. We are able to turn on light when we are not at

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, turn off light even we are

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bed

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the bed

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or even set a timer to turn off

light

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on its own.

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, in hot climate country, it is

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an advantage when we are able to turn on an

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before we arrived or

on the other hand

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, in cold climate country, it is lovely to have a heater turn on before we arrive

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as our house will be warm and

comfty

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comfy

. In conclusion, I strongly agree that the advance in technology of these

home

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appliances

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improve our lifestyle in a better way as they help

people

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to reduce their

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and make our life easier.

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