Modern appliances in the home have become more common, leaving no doubt that advances in technology have improved our lifestyle. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
In the present world, our
home
appliances
had been developed and advanced to enhance our lifestyle to become simpler. From my point of view, it is agreed that these appliances
have improve
our life to become easier. In the following paragraphs, the reasons to support my opinion will Change the verb form
improved
be discuss
more in detail.
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be discussed
be discussing
Firstly
, these advance
technology Replace the word
advanced
appliances
help to reduce people
Change noun form
people's
time
to clean up their house as we can not denined
that most of the Correct your spelling
denied
defined
time
in people
life was given Change noun form
people's
to
work. Change preposition
on
For instance
, Office worker
that Fix the agreement mistake
workers
are
rushing to work in Change the verb form
is
early
morning and head back Add an article
the early
home
when it is already a
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apply
night
Correct your spelling
nighttime
time
. These appliances
such
as dishwasher
or an automatic vacuum cleaner will give more Add an article
a dishwasher
the dishwasher
time
to their very limited relaxing time
. Therefore
, this
makes it clear that automated appliances
help to improve people
's lifestyle
.
Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
Secondly
, these modern appliances
help in improving people
's comfort and convenience. For example
, we are able to control our lighting through our mobile phone
. We are able to turn on light when we are not at Fix the agreement mistake
phones
home
, turn off light even we are on
Change preposition
in
bed
or even set a timer to turn off Add an article
the bed
light
on its own. Correct article usage
the light
Moreover
, in hot climate country, it is such
an advantage when we are able to turn on an air conditional
before we arrived or Add a hyphen
air-conditional
on the other hand
, in cold climate country, it is lovely to have a heater turn on before we arrive home
as our house will be warm and comfty
.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that the advance in technology of these Correct your spelling
comfy
home
appliances
improve our lifestyle in a better way as they help people
to reduce their time
and make our life easier.Submitted by nuanpan.aumm on
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