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some educationalists say that a child should be taught to play a musical instrument. to what extend do you agree or disagree

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Some teaching experts say that all offspring must learn to play musical apparatus. I strongly agree with
this
 idea because
melody
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 is able to help heirs for creating inventions. According to the experts' opinion, our schools pay attention to teaching tune. But entire world's schools teach more mathematics, biology, chemistry, physics than music.
In addition
, more and more parents think that there is no benefit from singing. So they desire their child to be a mathematician or doctor.
Furthermore
, some parents want to teach their generations.
However
, one problem is that they cannot pay money for their
children
's courses and musical
equipments
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equipment
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.
In addition
, music assists
children
 to relax.
Children
 will not spend their time
to
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 useless exercises if they learn to play with different musical gadgets. Various instruments help
human
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the human
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 body.
For instance
, the piano and violin calm and encourage humans' nerves. In conclusion, there are various
children
 and parents who do not like to learn about musical instruments. So every child selects appropriate lovely study. Music can assist to choose it.
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