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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.

#neighbours #noise #house
I sincerely apologize to both of you for any inconvenience caused due to the
noise
 from my house and thank you for bringing
this
 to my attention. At times, we might not be aware of the problems we unintentionally cause to our neighbours and I am hoping that you would accept my apology. I can assure you that I will take the necessary steps to prevent it. As you are aware, I am a musician by profession and my work requires me to do rehearsals before a performance at odd times.
In addition
 to
this
, I
also
 provide coaching to music students in the morning.
Although
, I am sincere about making sure that the
noise
 level remains low and within the range of my property, it is quite clear that it was higher
this
 time. To address the problem of high
noise
 levels, I have called a friend of mine who is an expert in sound engineering. He has suggested ways to contain
this
noise
 problem by installing
noise
 cancellation frames on windows and doors and making the room airtight. It may cost me a significant amount but should work in the long run. Please know that making the modification to the existing arrangement will take up to a month. I am afraid that you will have to tolerate noises for some more time, though I will try my best to keep it a minimum, and hope that you will be agreeable to the proposed solution. Again, I regret the inconvenience caused to you. Yours sincerely,
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