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Some are of the opinion that people are naturally born as good leaders while others feel that leadership skills can be learned. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Leadership
 has been a topic of discussion among the elite of society, Some believe that it is something innate and some individuals are born with some trites that help them to become leaders, while others disagree and think that
leadership
 is something that we acquire through the live experience. In
this
 essay I will be discussing both views and why I totally agree with the
second
 opinion.
To begin
 with, individuals who are of the opinion that
leadership
 is innate base their argument on the fact that some people are born with a charismatic personality and have a powerful presence which is something that can not be learned.
Moreover
, being creative and having a vision are essential
skills
 to be a powerful
leader
 which are
skills
 that individuals are born with.
On the other hand
, it is undeniable that certain
skills
 that we acquire and learn through life's hardship play a vital role in shaping our character. Strategic thinking is an important skill it is what distinguishes a good
leader
 from a bad
one
. For ,instance MARTIN LUTHER KING JR was a
leader
 for the civil rights movement
one
 of the key
skills
 that made him a successful
leader
 is the fact that he had a vision that
one
 day all people will have equal rights in regard to their race , gender and religion.
Furthermore
, without ,followers there is no commander and in order to have ,followers
one
 must have the ability to encourage and motivate people around them
this
 requires assertiveness and having good communication
skills
such
 as being a good speaker and a good listener. And
last
 but not least have the confidence to stand up for what you believe and work hard to achieve your ambition. All of those are
skills
 that are learned through life experiences. In conclusion,I strongly believe that
leadership
skills
 are something that we learn and acquire through various live hardships, failures and experiences.
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