You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You’re very interested in taking part, but you’re not very fit and are worried you wouldn’t be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: Explain why you’re interested in the tour. Ask for information about dates and prices. Express your concerns about your fitness level.

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am reaching out to you regarding your advertisement in the adventure magazine, issued on Mach 4th,2022. I am always interested in walking tours which are organized in the mountains. I am aware that mountain experience is extremely amazing since I used to hike before I started to work. It has been more than five years since I gave up climbing but I would like to participate in your walking tour. My doctor recommended that I need to walk more frequently and get fresh air.

Therefore

, your program is what I was looking for, and I would appreciate it if you could send me a travel itinerary so I can take a vacation from work.

Additionally

, I am on a tight budget and I would be thankful if you could give me a reasonable price.

Finally

, since I have not been in a good shape for long years, I have a real concern that I could not handle the difficulty of mountains. Please let me know that mountain is suitable for beginners. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Dorna Sadeghi

Submitted by dornasadeghi912 on Thu Mar 10 2022

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