Read the question below and write a letter. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter: Introduce yourself and your family Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find Give your preference for the location of the accommodation

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter to buy a house in Sydney, Australia. My name is

Nithisha

Correct your spelling

Natasha

. I recently accepted a position in Sydney.

As a result

, I intend to relocate with my family. My husband and child will accompany me to Australia. I need your assistance in purchasing a home in Australia. First and foremost, I'm looking for a two-bedroom

apartment

Furthermore

, a completely furnished

apartment

will be an excellent option because I do not believe I will be able to devote much time to purchasing furniture and other necessities. It will

also

be beneficial if it contains a children's playroom and a balcony.

Nevertheless

, it should have one parking place, as I was considering purchasing a car in the next two months.

Nonetheless

, I have a work in the Mascot suburb. So, if you can arrange an

apartment

in Mascot or nearby communities like Glebe or Surry Hills, that would be fantastic because I don't want to relocate too far from my workplace. It would be quite great if you could assist me in finding

such

apartment

. I will wait for your response. Your's faithfully, Nithisha

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

190 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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