You have seen an advertisement from a couple who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your languge for a year. Write a letter to the couple, In your letter explain why you think tou would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job

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Dear Sir, Madam,
This
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is Ryan, I am from Taiwan. I have seen the advertisement in which you are recruiting a
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speaking lecturer to teach your offspring for a year. I believe that I have the capability to do
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job because I am a native speaker of
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and the content that I am going to teach your children is not only the method to use
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but
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the
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culture.
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, I am a cookery school student,
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I can be a babysitter to take care of your children while you need assistance.
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, I offer the extra service for your family which I can cook dinner before you arrive home,
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you can enjoy dinner with your children. As I have mentioned , I am a cookery school student from overseas,
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I need
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job to support my school fee and rent a room for my accommodation. Thank you for taking the time to read
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letter. I looking forward to hearing from you Best Regards, Ryan
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