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Some people think that a sence of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinio

#people #sence #competition #children #co-operate #adults #opinio
Nowadays,
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 skill like
collaborate
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 even
compete
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 with
others
,
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 is one of
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the daily
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life
 indicators that should be
teached
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 to
children
.
This
 is
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 competency that
children
 should have when they are in
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labor
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 industry or when they socialize with
others
 as a society.
However
, it is often found the argumentations in society which is some people emphasize that
children
 should be
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 used to with
competition
. Whereas
others
 think it will be more valuable to
children
future
 if we train
children
 how to cooperate with
others
.
Firstly
,
competition
 is a
media
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 to ignite
children
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children's
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 spirit to learn new and important things for
life
. Through
competition
,
children
 learn to develop their academic and emotional strength.
For example
, when I was
child
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a child
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, I always want to become one of
top
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 ten ranking in my class.
Hence
, I studied a lot to reach my goal. Yet, sometimes I was fail even when I had studied hard. From my experience, I did not only expand my knowledge, but I
also
 allowed
my self
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 to feel the failure and accept it as part of
life
.
Secondly
,
children
also
 need to get used to
collaborate
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 with
others
.
This
 is an essential capability they should have.
It
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 beneficial to build up
professional
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a professional
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 career for their
future
.
For instance
, when I was
teenager
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, I was a shy person,
hence
 it was difficult
to
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 me to start
relation
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 with
others
. Later I realize that If I want to become a
success
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 women, I should learn how to cooperate with
others
.
Therefore
, I have joined a lot of volunteer activities to get a lot of
experiences
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experience
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 on how to collaborate with
others
.
From
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 my opinion,
collaborate
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 and
compete
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competition
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 are two competence that
children
 should have as it critical for their
future
 as an adult.
Nevertheless
, there is always
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 impact of something, yet it depends on how
children
 apply it in their
life
. If they apply it
to
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 much and in the wrong situation it would bring a disaster for them. To conclude,
this
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 to skills should be
teached
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taught
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 to
children
 because of two main reasons.
First
,
competition
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the competition
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 encouraged
children
 to develop their knowledge and character.
Second
,
cooperate
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 with
others
 is important to
children
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children's
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future
career
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.

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