You are working in an international company, write a letter to inform your manager about your resignation. In your letter, you should: •thank the company for the opportunity that you joined it •tell the reason for your resignation •confirm the time you are leaving
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you about giving up the job. I have been working in your business for the last
2 years .I really appreciate the chance that The company has offered me . I feel very delighted to be a part
of this
big enterprise .
Unfortunately, I have to migrate to another city as my father's duty has been changed to New Delhi. It is not possible for me to stay alone here . So that's why I am taking this
decision to quit this
job .
I am going to New Delhi on the 1st of January so this
month is the last
of my position. In future, if I ever get a chance to join your company I would definitely do that.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience
Yours Sincerely
Priya.Submitted by sainisaini7146 on
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organization
Make sure to fully organize your ideas into distinct paragraphs, each focusing on a single main idea. The letter currently has some merging of ideas about appreciation, the reason for leaving, and future intentions.
content detail
While you have expressed gratitude, a bit more elaboration could enhance the sincerity of the thanks. Consider mentioning specific experiences or opportunities you appreciated.
structure
The letter has a clear greeting and closing, which is suitable for the formal tone required.
clarity
The reasons for leaving are clearly stated, making it easy for the reader to understand your decision.
tone
The tone is polite and professionally appropriate, especially with the expression of gratitude and future intentions.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite