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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

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Some
people
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 state that the waste from homes hasn't been completely recycled. In order to raise the rate of recycling, the governments should make it a legal requirement that seems to be the only and direct solution. The essay will discuss
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 issue and summarize my own point of view. I totally agree with the statement that the government should set up laws and regulations on recycling. In general, there are many benefits of recycling.
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 with, recycling correctly can reduce the amount of
garbage
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 waste.
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, it can
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 decrease the loading of the incinerator which can lower the air pollution while Incinerating
garbage
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. Government should put more effort in order to promote citizen recycling.
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, sep up
garbage
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 waste-related regulations.
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, increase the cost of dealing
garbage
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.
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, there are leftover and
garbage
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 machines in Korea which were placed in every neighbourhood,
people
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 will have to place their food waste and
garbage
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 on the
machine
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 and get weight. Afterwards, the
machine
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 will show the price on the screen, they will have to pay before throwing away their
garbage
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. Forasmuch,
people
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 will learn how to recycle so they could lower the price from dealing
garbage
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.
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, set up rewards to improve the willingness on recycling. According to the experiment from psychologists, rewards can stimulate
people
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 for doing something they don't familiar with. In some Western countries, they had a
machine
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 called a recycling
machine
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 in which you can insert cans, plastic bottles and glasses to earn some money or market vouchers from it. The more you bring the more you can earn,
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, it could encourage
people
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 to do
garbage
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 recycling. To conclude, along with
people
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 nowadays are likely to pursue high quality and efficient living experience, more and more non-necessary
garbage
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 has been made at the same time. The government should take
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 issue seriously and set up rules of recycling to lower the harm to our mother earth.

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