People should be responsible for the pollution problems caused by transportation, while others think govt should be responsible. Discuss both sides and give opinion.

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some crowd think they are responsible for pollution issues that are caused by

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, others believe that

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should take charge of these problems. In my opinion, I agree with the latter argument because these serious issues need an organization to deal with and people may not have adequate awareness. In

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essay, I will discuss both views and support my opinion with examples. Nowadays, some people argue they are capable of trimming the pollution problems that

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transportation. To illustrate, they assume that they can reduce the number of used cars.

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, every four

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gather to move from one place to another by using one car

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of four cars.

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a result,

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chemicals that are produced

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vehicles will be decreased.

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, I would argue that the responsibility

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solving these problems

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lies in the state.

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big operations need an organization to handle and

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put the laws that citizens should follow.

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, campaigns must be led to raise the nation's awareness under governmental supervision.

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, setting appropriate rules to tackle the air toxicity issue can be only done by the government.

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, lawbreakers will get the appropriate punishment whether it is paying a fine or another penalty.

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some folks think they can take the blame for air toxicity, I tend to agree that the state should take charge of

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dilemma because it can easily tackle

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issue and motivate other people to get strict with the new rules.