Some people feel that boarding schools are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.
Some people think that boarding schools are the best choice for
juvenile
, Fix the agreement mistake
juveniles
whereas
others think that it is not good, because of some reasons. However
, the issue is not entirely straightforward, and the argument can also
be made against the idea. This
essay will discuss the debate and a give concluding view. One
the one hand, supporters of boarding Correct your spelling
On
school
say that living independently gives some advantages. First and foremost, Fix the agreement mistake
schools
cause
is that Add an article
the cause
students
can boost their confidence when they live in dormitory
. Add an article
a dormitory
the dormitory
As if
children Correct word choice
If
living
on their own, they become Wrong verb form
live
independently
to make decisions, spend money smartly and cook well. Change the word
independent
Secondly
, it is often said that living in boarding school
, students
can focus on their lessons and spend time in boarding
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the boarding
a boarding
school
library with their friends. At least, dormitory students
could learn cooking therefore
would not hunger. Correct word choice
and therefore
For instance
, my classmates, who live in university dormitory said that below advantages, they learnt cook
well and started to Fix the infinitive
to cook
spent
money Change the verb
spend
for
their necessary things and make decisions Change preposition
on
by
their own. On the Change preposition
on
another
hand, opponents of boarding Correct quantifier usage
other
school
point Fix the agreement mistake
schools
that
spending quality time with their family and living Change preposition
out that
safe
and Change the word
safely
comfortable
is Change the word
comfortably
most
important reason. As Correct article usage
the most
a
reasons sometimes Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
students
face financial problems and feel home sickness
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homesickness
due to
absence
of parents. Correct article usage
the absence
Furthermore
, students
with bad habit
might harm other Fix the agreement mistake
habits
students
like taking drugs, spend
more time in Wrong verb form
spending
pc
game Correct your spelling
PC
center
and Fix the agreement mistake
centers
miss
classes. Replace the word
missing
For example
, my cousin who lives in countryside
, has Add an article
the countryside
been
started Unnecessary verb
apply
take
drugs and got addicted pc Change the form of the verb
taking
game
since he started to study in Ulaanbaatar Fix the agreement mistake
games
due to
out of
focus Change preposition
apply
of
their parents. In conclusion, Change preposition
on
students
should stay with their family
rather than live in boarding Fix the agreement mistake
families
school
. It appears that the drawbacks of sending Fix the agreement mistake
schools
students
to boarding schools far outweighs
the minor advantages that it provides.Change the verb form
outweigh
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion