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Some people believe that video games are beneficial to children whereas others believe that it has negative effects.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Few people consider that letting their
children
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 play
games
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 will bring some positive results, while others hold different opinions. In
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 argument, but
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 I tend to believe that
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games
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 are not beneficial for
kids
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.
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 various negative impacts of playing
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games
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Firstly
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, it influences whether
kids
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submitt
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 their homework on time or not.
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, youngsters may play their
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 after school and it is possible for them to distract by these
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 and influence their quality of schoolwork.
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, students tend to focus on their
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instead
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 of making friends at school.
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, they may lose many opportunities to join clubs or attend more volunteer activities during weekends.
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, in the long term,
video
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games
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 may bring many negative consequences on
children
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.
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, playing
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games
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 can bring some advantages for
children
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.
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,
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productivity will be raised because
kids
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 always want to finish their schoolwork earlier to play the
games
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 as soon as possible.
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, it is a good way for youngsters to make a proper schedule to fit their
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. At the same time, they could learn time management and self-control from these problems.
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, some
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games
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 encourage
kids
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 to think and solve problems.
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, Switch and PS5 have many new
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 for
children
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 in order to inspire their creativity and logical thinking.
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, not only raise the productivity but
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 have the thinking training. In conclusion,
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 playing
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games
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 have many positive effects on
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, I still consider that students need to focus on their schoolwork more and prevent any factors to distract them in case.
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