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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being sellf-employed?

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It is clear that modern
people
 prefer to work alone, not in groups
such
 as organization and business.
As a result
 of
this
 working trend, a lot of employers have gone through the lack of employees.
This
 essay indicates the reasons for
this
 industrial environment and the disadvantages caused by
this
 change. With the development of the Internet and mobile devices,
people
 can work at home easily.
Also
, individuals no longer strive to get into the company, they desire to earn income by being self-employed nowadays ,especially youth workers. The reason
of
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this
 trend is that
people
 have started to want flexible working hours. Flexible working has lots of merits
such
 as a human can spend time with their family and friends more often and they can release their stress without restrictions from the company.
Therefore
,
people
 have been attracted advantages of being owners on their own.
However
,
this
 tendency can cause problems in
social
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the social
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 aspect. It is unquestionable that being successful self-employed is not easy and there are many cases that individuals who operate
self company
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 have given up
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 their work.
Therefore
,
this
 trend can make lots of the jobless who fail to make successful self-company and it will induce a lot of consumptions of welfare. It is evident that spending lots of taxes on welfare is not a welcoming activity for the
next
 generations. In conclusion, more workers have a dream of being self-employed because they can control their own lives flexibly.
On the other hand
, an increasing number of self-company can induce to have bad impacts on society in terms of wasting excessive country's wealth on welfare.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employment
  • freelancing
  • entrepreneurship
  • autonomy
  • financial stability
  • work-life balance
  • financial insecurity
  • lack of support
  • resources
  • long working hours
  • uncertain income
  • job security
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