You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

In

this

modern scenario,technology is increasing by leaps and bounds,it has made

people

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lives

more

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significantly easier and faster,so some academics provide their lessons on the website.

As a result

,scholars can learn enormous amounts of information through websites

such

as YouTube as well as Facebook.According to me,it brings a greater positive influence on

people

in many ways.

This

essay will go into better detail with my subject view. To embark on,there are numerous reasons why

this

phenomenon is the best.

Firstly

,

people

can save

their

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considerable amount of

time

as they do not want to attend

to

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their institute

classes

.

Consequently

,decreasing expenditures.To elucidate,convey facilities are the essential things to go to school if

people

prefer offline services,

therefore

they have to pay transport fees,

thus

this

is

the

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one of the advantages of

this

statement.

Secondly

,the public may be able to perform many things at a

time

if they have

classes

on computers.

For instance

,nowadays,it is very difficult to manage

time

for multitudes,especially for married persons as they should have to complete their household chores.So that

this

online course will be useful for them. On another hand,not only

this

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facility enables

time

-consuming but

also

reduces the burden of

college's

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college

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lectures.

For example

,today,many faculties just give

introduction

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an introduction

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of

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to

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that particular topic,

then

the rest of the topics

is

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are

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students should have to finish their assignments with the assistance of the

google

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app.

Although

it has some positive aspects,there are

also

some negative sides which are individual's concentration may

reduces

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due to the disturbance of families as well as they will have to confront the internet signals,especially it is very challenging for rural

people

as there are signals may not be proper due to weather conditions. To conclude,every coin has both sides,so

this

statement has

also

both positive as well as negative impacts.I think benefits are considered to be important in terms of saving

time

and

cost-effective

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as well as reducing the burden of teachers.The drawbacks are less concentration and the internet problem,even though there are demerits,online

classes

play an indispensable role in everyone's life rather than offline

classes

.