You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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In
this
modern scenario,technology is increasing by leaps and bounds,it has made
people
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lives
more
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significantly easier and faster,so some academics provide their lessons on the website.
As a result
,scholars can learn enormous amounts of information through websites
such
as YouTube as well as Facebook.According to me,it brings a greater positive influence on
people
in many ways.
This
essay will go into better detail with my subject view. To embark on,there are numerous reasons why
this
phenomenon is the best.
Firstly
,
people
can save
their
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considerable amount of
time
as they do not want to attend
to
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their institute
classes
.
Consequently
,decreasing expenditures.To elucidate,convey facilities are the essential things to go to school if
people
prefer offline services,
therefore
they have to pay transport fees,
thus
this
is
the
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one of the advantages of
this
statement.
Secondly
,the public may be able to perform many things at a
time
if they have
classes
on computers.
For instance
,nowadays,it is very difficult to manage
time
for multitudes,especially for married persons as they should have to complete their household chores.So that
this
online course will be useful for them. On another hand,not only
this
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facility enables
time
-consuming but
also
reduces the burden of
college's
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lectures.
For example
,today,many faculties just give
introduction
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of
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that particular topic,
then
the rest of the topics
is
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are
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students should have to finish their assignments with the assistance of the
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app.
Although
it has some positive aspects,there are
also
some negative sides which are individual's concentration may
reduces
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due to the disturbance of families as well as they will have to confront the internet signals,especially it is very challenging for rural
people
as there are signals may not be proper due to weather conditions. To conclude,every coin has both sides,so
this
statement has
also
both positive as well as negative impacts.I think benefits are considered to be important in terms of saving
time
and
cost-effective
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as well as reducing the burden of teachers.The drawbacks are less concentration and the internet problem,even though there are demerits,online
classes
play an indispensable role in everyone's life rather than offline
classes
.
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