Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their family. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Children
have much free Use synonyms
time
to do in their youth. It comes up with their eagerness to know every little thing that suits them, especially when it comes to a social connection, Use synonyms
such
as playing with their friends. Linking Words
For instance
, parents should pay more attention to Linking Words
children
's activities so they can process what is good and what is bad for them.
Some people believe that Use synonyms
children
should have more Use synonyms
time
with their families to minimize negative impacts that would hurt Use synonyms
for
them. It believes their family can teach them good stuff, so in the following Change preposition
apply
Use synonyms
time
they will become someone with good manners and can make positive impacts on society. Add a comma
,time
For example
, the heir at age 5 to 11 still do not know how to do some things correctly, so in Linking Words
this
case, their family can help them to learn better by spending their free Linking Words
time
. Use synonyms
Although
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this
seems good, as a human, they still have to spend with others.
As a part of human beings, an heir Linking Words
also
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need
to socialize with friends of their age. Socializing can be helpful for them in the future when they have to work together with others. Change the verb form
needs
For example
, Linking Words
children
that usually play with their buddies can build their communication ways and create social bonds between them. Use synonyms
Thus
, they will have better sympathy in the future that help society to be better. Aside from Linking Words
this
, they Linking Words
also
can release their stress and it will lead to being happier.
In conclusion, Linking Words
although
they are a pure little thing that still has Linking Words
learn
so many things from their family, they Wrong verb form
learned
also
have to know what freedom is. Linking Words
For example
by playing with their friends at the same age. Linking Words
This
will not only help how they grow up but Linking Words
also
create their sympathy towards each other. Linking Words
Besides
that, they will learn how to work together and make good communication ways.Linking Words
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