Some people prefer the lifestyle and activities offered when living in a cold environment. Others prefer a hot environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often said that nowadays about a better place for
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, a
lot
of humans like a cool
climate
country,
however
, others love a warm, sunny and dry
climate
. From my point of view, both the environments have a
lot
of advantages and choice is very hard and unstandard. In the below essay, I will elaborate on both sides in detail.
To begin
with, the lifestyle and activities in a cold
environment
are
good
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choice
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for
nothern
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other
people.
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,
population
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the population
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of Norway, Sweden, Denmark, Finland, Russia, Iceland and lands of Nothern America like
a
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cold weather. There is no denying,
this
factor is
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main habit for
lifestyle
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the lifestyle
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of these nationalities.
Furthermore
, a cold
environment
give
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to feel
an
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extrim
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extreme
emotions. Peaceful winter pictures, a
lot
of snow, great and beautiful ice nature are flexible and
unforgetable
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unforgettable
for different people.
In contrast
to the above point, most
of
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people
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the people
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will prefer a hot
environment
, because
a
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most territories are warm places
in
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our planet.
For instance
, most countries have a
moderate
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moderately
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hot
climate
and their territory are bigger than countries with cold
climate
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. We all know
a humans
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humans
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, they
maybe
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prefer activities in warm weather, prefer
a
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beach sands,
walk in
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sunny city or village.
In addition
, the sun is
very
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positive,
important
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the important
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thing for folks. They should get
a
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more sunny's
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lights. In conclusion, there is no doubt that hot and cold environments are equal in beautiful and superb.
Hot
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environment
have
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a
lot
of advantages, while a cold
environment
have
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has
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a good options
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good options
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for
perfect
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a perfect
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lifestyle and activities. In my opinion,
this
prefers
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depend
of
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mentality and individual choices.
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