You are arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend.In your letter. Explain the important event. Apologise for the situation. Suggest a new arrangements.

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Dear Sarah, How are you these days?I hope you and your family are really doing well.I am writing to discuss the Trip I had booked to visit you in Canada.Unfortunately,I have to adjust plans because of something important that has come up unexpectedly. The reason for the change is that my brother is getting married

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Summer.I had plans to come to Canada from April 2nd to April 30th.

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,my brother's wedding is scheduled for April 15th.What's more ,I have been asked to look after all the events.So,I have no choice but to attend the wedding. I am so sorry for

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situation,as I knew you have already booked time off work so that you could spend time with me.

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,As I am sure you could understand the situation that I can't miss out on my brother's wedding. What I could do is to shift the dates of my trip ,As I am

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free for the whole of May.Would it be possible for you to speak to your Boss and change the dates of your Holiday?If so,I would really appreciate it. Feel free to contact me anytime. All the Best. Zunaira Faiz

Submitted by zunaira.faiz on Sat Mar 12 2022

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

191 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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